The Man Who Was Almost a Man

by

Richard Wright

Dave Saunders Character Analysis

Dave is a Black seventeen-year-old living with his family in the American South around the 1930s. He works plowing fields on a plantation owned by a white man, Jim Hawkins, where members of his family (including his parents, Mrs. Saunders and Bob Saunders) also work. He dislikes the way he’s treated by older fellow workers, who he feels regularly mock and talk down to him. Having internalized a sense that respect is a product of masculine physical power, perhaps in part because his father regularly threatens to beat him, Dave concludes that the one way to prove himself a man is to own a gun. Dave then sets about convincing his mother to give him two dollars to buy a gun with the lie that he will immediately give it to his father. Instead, after getting the gun, Dave rather recklessly hides the loaded weapon under his pillow, and then sneaks out with it, planning to go do his field work in as distant a place as possible so he can practice firing it. But this plan backfires when he shoots the gun for the first time—he closes his eyes as he pulls the trigger—and accidentally kills the mule Jenny. He attempts to lie his way out of the predicament by saying Jenny accidentally impaled herself on a spike of the plow, but no one believes him and, crying, he confesses. His father is furious, and Dave ends up deeply in debt to Mr. Hawkins, who owned the mule. Faced with this situation, Dave runs away—hopping a train for parts unknown with his now-unloaded gun, hoping to find a place where he can be a man. Dave doesn’t show much growth over the course of the story—he begins it focused on a simplistic idea that strength will make him a respected man, and ends it still looking to become a man. The open-ended nature of the story’s conclusion, however, suggests that what sort of man Dave will become is still up in the air.

Dave Saunders Quotes in The Man Who Was Almost a Man

The The Man Who Was Almost a Man quotes below are all either spoken by Dave Saunders or refer to Dave Saunders. For each quote, you can also see the other characters and themes related to it (each theme is indicated by its own dot and icon, like this one:
Manhood and Violence Theme Icon
).
The Man Who Was Almost a Man Quotes

Shucks, a man oughta hava little gun aftah he done worked hard all day.

Related Characters: Dave Saunders (speaker)
Related Symbols: The Gun
Page Number: 3
Explanation and Analysis:

“How you n ol man Hawkins gitten erlong?”

“Suh?”

“Can’t yuh hear? Why don yuh lissen? Ah ast yu how wuz yuh n ol man Hawkins gittin along?”

“Oh, swell, Pa. Ah plows mo lan than anybody over there.”

“Waal, yuh oughta keep yo mind on whut yuh doin.”

“Yessuh.”

Related Characters: Dave Saunders (speaker), Bob Saunders (Pa) (speaker), Jim Hawkins
Page Number: 7
Explanation and Analysis:

“But Ma, we needa gun. Pa ain got no gun. We needa gun in the house. Yuh kin never tell whut might happen.”

Related Characters: Dave Saunders (speaker), Bob Saunders (Pa), Mrs. Saunders (Ma)
Related Symbols: The Gun
Page Number: 8
Explanation and Analysis:

In the gray light of dawn he held it loosely, feeling a sense of power. Could kill a man with a gun like this. Kill anybody, black or white.

Related Characters: Dave Saunders
Related Symbols: The Gun
Page Number: 10
Explanation and Analysis:

The gun felt loose in his fingers; he waved it wildly for a moment. Then he shut his eyes and tightened his forefinger. Bloom! A report half deafened him and he thought his right hand was torn from his arm.

Related Characters: Dave Saunders
Related Symbols: The Gun
Page Number: 11
Explanation and Analysis:

Then he saw the hole in Jenny’s side, right between the ribs. It was round, wet, red. A crimson stream streaked down the front leg, flowing fast. Good Gawd! Ah wuzn’t shootin at the mule.

Related Characters: Dave Saunders, Jenny
Related Symbols: The Gun, Jenny the Mule
Page Number: 12
Explanation and Analysis:

Somebody in the crowd laughed. Jim Hawkins walked close to Dave and looked into his face.

“Well, looks like you have bought you a dead mule, Dave.”

“Ah swear fo Gawd, Ah didn go t kill the mule Mistah Hawkins!”

“But you killed her!”

Related Characters: Dave Saunders (speaker), Jim Hawkins (speaker), Jenny
Related Symbols: Jenny the Mule
Page Number: 15
Explanation and Analysis:

Nobody ever gave him anything. All he did was work. They treat me like a mule n then they beat me.

Related Characters: Dave Saunders, Jenny
Related Symbols: Jenny the Mule
Page Number: 17
Explanation and Analysis:

When he reached the top of a ridge he stood straight and proud in the moonlight, looking at Jim Hawkins’ big white house, feeling the gun sagging in his pocket. Lawd, ef Ah had just one mo bullet Ah’d taka shot at that house. Ah’d like t scare ol man Hawkins jusa little . . . Jusa enough t let im know Dave Saunders is a man.

Related Characters: Dave Saunders, Jim Hawkins
Related Symbols: The Gun
Page Number: 18
Explanation and Analysis:

He felt his pocket; the gun was still there. Ahead the long rails were glinting in the moonlight, stretching away, away to somewhere, somewhere where he could be a man . . .

Related Characters: Dave Saunders
Related Symbols: The Gun
Page Number: 18
Explanation and Analysis:
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Dave Saunders Quotes in The Man Who Was Almost a Man

The The Man Who Was Almost a Man quotes below are all either spoken by Dave Saunders or refer to Dave Saunders. For each quote, you can also see the other characters and themes related to it (each theme is indicated by its own dot and icon, like this one:
Manhood and Violence Theme Icon
).
The Man Who Was Almost a Man Quotes

Shucks, a man oughta hava little gun aftah he done worked hard all day.

Related Characters: Dave Saunders (speaker)
Related Symbols: The Gun
Page Number: 3
Explanation and Analysis:

“How you n ol man Hawkins gitten erlong?”

“Suh?”

“Can’t yuh hear? Why don yuh lissen? Ah ast yu how wuz yuh n ol man Hawkins gittin along?”

“Oh, swell, Pa. Ah plows mo lan than anybody over there.”

“Waal, yuh oughta keep yo mind on whut yuh doin.”

“Yessuh.”

Related Characters: Dave Saunders (speaker), Bob Saunders (Pa) (speaker), Jim Hawkins
Page Number: 7
Explanation and Analysis:

“But Ma, we needa gun. Pa ain got no gun. We needa gun in the house. Yuh kin never tell whut might happen.”

Related Characters: Dave Saunders (speaker), Bob Saunders (Pa), Mrs. Saunders (Ma)
Related Symbols: The Gun
Page Number: 8
Explanation and Analysis:

In the gray light of dawn he held it loosely, feeling a sense of power. Could kill a man with a gun like this. Kill anybody, black or white.

Related Characters: Dave Saunders
Related Symbols: The Gun
Page Number: 10
Explanation and Analysis:

The gun felt loose in his fingers; he waved it wildly for a moment. Then he shut his eyes and tightened his forefinger. Bloom! A report half deafened him and he thought his right hand was torn from his arm.

Related Characters: Dave Saunders
Related Symbols: The Gun
Page Number: 11
Explanation and Analysis:

Then he saw the hole in Jenny’s side, right between the ribs. It was round, wet, red. A crimson stream streaked down the front leg, flowing fast. Good Gawd! Ah wuzn’t shootin at the mule.

Related Characters: Dave Saunders, Jenny
Related Symbols: The Gun, Jenny the Mule
Page Number: 12
Explanation and Analysis:

Somebody in the crowd laughed. Jim Hawkins walked close to Dave and looked into his face.

“Well, looks like you have bought you a dead mule, Dave.”

“Ah swear fo Gawd, Ah didn go t kill the mule Mistah Hawkins!”

“But you killed her!”

Related Characters: Dave Saunders (speaker), Jim Hawkins (speaker), Jenny
Related Symbols: Jenny the Mule
Page Number: 15
Explanation and Analysis:

Nobody ever gave him anything. All he did was work. They treat me like a mule n then they beat me.

Related Characters: Dave Saunders, Jenny
Related Symbols: Jenny the Mule
Page Number: 17
Explanation and Analysis:

When he reached the top of a ridge he stood straight and proud in the moonlight, looking at Jim Hawkins’ big white house, feeling the gun sagging in his pocket. Lawd, ef Ah had just one mo bullet Ah’d taka shot at that house. Ah’d like t scare ol man Hawkins jusa little . . . Jusa enough t let im know Dave Saunders is a man.

Related Characters: Dave Saunders, Jim Hawkins
Related Symbols: The Gun
Page Number: 18
Explanation and Analysis:

He felt his pocket; the gun was still there. Ahead the long rails were glinting in the moonlight, stretching away, away to somewhere, somewhere where he could be a man . . .

Related Characters: Dave Saunders
Related Symbols: The Gun
Page Number: 18
Explanation and Analysis: