Adunni’s first draft of the essay might demonstrate her grammatical competence, but it doesn’t speak her truth. When she considers Ms. Tia’s advice, starts over, and writes, unedited, about her experiences, she is able to express the thoughts, feelings, and experiences she’s kept bottled up inside for so much of the novel. It’s in this moment that Adunni finds the strength to express herself in the “louding voice” she’s coveted for so long. This moment demonstrates the healing possibilities of education and one example of the positive outcomes that can happen when women support one another.