Jack Hawley is a long-time friend of the artist and has a knack for art criticism. Although he is not a good painter, the artist relies on Jack’s input on his work. In the story, Jack has recently returned home from traveling abroad, where he was getting a fresh artistic perspective. When the artist shows Jack his work depicting Mrs. Monarch and Major Monarch, Jack completely rejects them. Although he struggles to express exactly why he so dislikes the Monarchs and the artist’s work depicting them, he is very clear in his opinion that the artist will ruin his artistic career if he continues to work with them. Even after the artist does dismiss the Monarchs, Jack believes that working with them permanently damaged the artist’s artistic vision.